Now that I've set out all 17 entries individually,
I'd thought I'd put them all in one easy to access place.
What is a Haiku you ask?
The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5. The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.
I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.
To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.
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Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.
Outside Links:
- "Succinct and serene, it's home loan haiku", San Jose Mercury News
- "Mortgage Haiku?", Redfin Blog
- Inman News - Left Brain / Right Brain
- Hotpads Carnival of Real Estate - Mortgage Haiku
- Inman News Carnival of Real Estate - Mortgage Haiku
- The Boston Globe - Mortgage Haiku
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Cree - Thank you!
Maureen - Thank you as well. I've actually enjoyed it.
Jennifer - I love the visual look of all these backdrops.
Nooo! It's supposed to be over =/
J/K. I admitted I wasn't getting it. But I liked the pretty pictures. And I got some of them... kinda. I don't want to think too hard. I'm usually tired by the time I get here.
Lisa - You know I love ya to pieces!
Not just for you, but for all the others who are maybe a little too intimidated to ask, here is a cheat sheet for each one.
And there you have it. A simple and easy KEY to each poem!
Mike,
What an awesome amount of work! I particularly like the fantail guppy!
Mike in Tucson
Thanks Mike! It was so simple and elegant. I tried my best to match the wordsto the print so as to not distract. That was the best option on that one that I could come up with.
Mike.... I just wanted to stop in and say.... very creative. I only briefly read one of your posts out of the 17. I just haven't had time in the last 2 to 3 weeks but help clients. So I guess I will have to go back sometime this weekend and read each one. But from the comments, sounds like many were impressed. Overall, again, very creative.
Love the cheat sheet.